docs(onboarding): refine internal testing notice

README.i18n.yaml

@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 # side as of the last confirmed-consistent state. Both languages carry equal authority;
 # after editing either side, bring the other along and re-record with:
 #   pnpm run verify-translation-pairing --write README.md
-README.md: baf5d79b157ae845cc837261452853afd48dbe46
-README.zh.md: 57d7bcf44cda36b37ae233754dbfba4ead2204fd
+README.md: b17098a4fee2354dfb2015afe34582f725b59df1
+README.zh.md: 9a17f76608e23719d27e9eb43d01582987adb3bf

README.md

@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@ It uses an architecture where **everything is a plugin**.
 
 ## Internal testing notice
 
-Thank you for making time to try DeepSeek Harness.
+Thank you for taking the time to try DeepSeek Harness.
 
-This version is still in internal testing. Some features remain unfinished, and parts of the experience may feel rough.
+This version is still in internal testing. Its functionality still needs improvement, and the experience may feel a little rough.
 
-“As one cuts and files, as one carves and polishes.” Products grow through repeated encounters with real use and candid feedback. The problems you uncover in practice may lead us to re-examine, or even discard, existing designs.
+“As one cuts and files, as one chisels and polishes.” A product grows through real encounters and candid feedback. Problems you discover in real use may prompt us to reconsider—or even overturn—our existing designs.
 
-We especially want to hear about moments of failure, confusion, or friction. If DeepSeek Harness does not help—or instead makes your work harder—please leave a message in our <a href="https://wj.qq.com/s2/27234598/03eb/">WeCom group</a> and tell us about your experience. Every report will help us refine it.
+We especially want to hear about failures, confusion, and friction. If you have any feedback or suggestions, please leave us a message in our <a href="https://wj.qq.com/s2/27234598/03eb/">WeCom group</a>. Every piece of feedback helps us refine it.
 
 ## Install
 

README.zh.md

@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ DeepSeek Harness（`dsh`）是一款基于 DeepSeek Harness SDK 构建的开源
 
 感谢您愿意拨冗试用 DeepSeek Harness。
 
-目前的版本仍处于内部测试阶段，有些功能仍待完善，有些体验难免粗粝。
+目前的版本仍处于内部测试阶段，功能仍待完善，体验难免有些粗糙。
 
-“如切如磋，如琢如磨。”产品的成长，离不开一次次真实的碰撞与坦诚的反馈。您在真实使用中暴露的问题，也可能促使我们重新审视，甚至推翻已有的设计。
+“如切如磋，如琢如磨。” 产品的成长，离不开一次次真实的碰撞与坦诚的反馈。您在真实使用中发现的问题，也可能促使我们重新审视，甚至推翻已有的设计。
 
-我们尤其希望听见那些失败、困惑与不顺手的时刻——如果它未能帮到您，甚至反而为工作平添了麻烦，请在企业微信群中留言，将使用感受告诉我们。每一条反馈，都会帮助我们把它打磨得更好。
+我们尤其希望听见那些失败、困惑与不顺手的时刻——如果您有任何反馈与建议，请在企业微信群中留言告诉我们。每一条反馈，都会帮助我们把它打磨得更好。
 
 ## 安装
 

apps/web/tests/snapshots/onboarding-deepseek-config/welcome.expected.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 - region "内测声明":
   - heading "内测声明" [level=2]
   - paragraph: 感谢您愿意拨冗试用 DeepSeek Harness。
-  - paragraph: 目前的版本仍处于内部测试阶段，有些功能仍待完善，有些体验难免粗粝。
-  - blockquote: “如切如磋，如琢如磨。” 产品的成长，离不开一次次真实的碰撞与坦诚的反馈。您在真实使用中暴露的问题，也可能促使我们重新审视，甚至推翻已有的设计。
+  - paragraph: 目前的版本仍处于内部测试阶段，功能仍待完善，体验难免有些粗糙。
+  - blockquote: “如切如磋，如琢如磨。” 产品的成长，离不开一次次真实的碰撞与坦诚的反馈。您在真实使用中发现的问题，也可能促使我们重新审视，甚至推翻已有的设计。
   - paragraph:
     - text: 我们尤其希望听见那些失败、困惑与不顺手的时刻——
-    - strong: 如果它未能帮到您，甚至反而为工作平添了麻烦，请在企业微信群中留言
-    - text: ，将使用感受告诉我们。每一条反馈，都会帮助我们把它打磨得更好。
+    - strong: 如果您有任何反馈与建议，请在企业微信群中留言告诉我们
+    - text: 。每一条反馈，都会帮助我们把它打磨得更好。
   - button "继续"

packages/client/ui-settings-general/src/onboarding-copy.ts

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ export const WELCOME_NOTICE_ACK_FIELD = 'welcomeNoticeVersion'
  * Bump only when the notice changes materially and every user should see it
  * again. The acknowledgement is compared for exact equality.
  */
-export const WELCOME_NOTICE_VERSION = '2026-07-30.3'
+export const WELCOME_NOTICE_VERSION = '2026-07-30.5'
 
 /** The complete editable welcome notice in both supported GUI locales. */
 export const WELCOME_NOTICE_COPY = {
@@ -16,22 +16,22 @@ export const WELCOME_NOTICE_COPY = {
     title: '内测声明',
     paragraphs: [
       '感谢您愿意拨冗试用 DeepSeek Harness。',
-      '目前的版本仍处于内部测试阶段，有些功能仍待完善，有些体验难免粗粝。',
-      '“如切如磋，如琢如磨。” 产品的成长，离不开一次次真实的碰撞与坦诚的反馈。您在真实使用中暴露的问题，也可能促使我们重新审视，甚至推翻已有的设计。',
-      '我们尤其希望听见那些失败、困惑与不顺手的时刻——如果它未能帮到您，甚至反而为工作平添了麻烦，请在企业微信群中留言，将使用感受告诉我们。每一条反馈，都会帮助我们把它打磨得更好。',
+      '目前的版本仍处于内部测试阶段，功能仍待完善，体验难免有些粗糙。',
+      '“如切如磋，如琢如磨。” 产品的成长，离不开一次次真实的碰撞与坦诚的反馈。您在真实使用中发现的问题，也可能促使我们重新审视，甚至推翻已有的设计。',
+      '我们尤其希望听见那些失败、困惑与不顺手的时刻——如果您有任何反馈与建议，请在企业微信群中留言告诉我们。每一条反馈，都会帮助我们把它打磨得更好。',
     ],
-    feedbackEmphasis: '如果它未能帮到您，甚至反而为工作平添了麻烦，请在企业微信群中留言',
+    feedbackEmphasis: '如果您有任何反馈与建议，请在企业微信群中留言告诉我们',
     continueLabel: '继续',
   },
   en: {
     title: 'Internal Testing Notice',
     paragraphs: [
       'Thank you for taking the time to try DeepSeek Harness.',
-      'This version is still in internal testing. Some features remain unfinished, and parts of the experience may feel rough.',
-      '“As one cuts and files, as one chisels and polishes.” A product grows through real encounters and candid feedback. Problems you uncover in real use may prompt us to reconsider—or even overturn—our existing designs.',
-      'We especially want to hear about failures, confusion, and friction. If it did not help you, or even made your work harder, please leave a message in the company WeChat group and tell us about your experience. Every piece of feedback helps us refine it.',
+      'This version is still in internal testing. Its functionality still needs improvement, and the experience may feel a little rough.',
+      '“As one cuts and files, as one chisels and polishes.” A product grows through real encounters and candid feedback. Problems you discover in real use may prompt us to reconsider—or even overturn—our existing designs.',
+      'We especially want to hear about failures, confusion, and friction. If you have any feedback or suggestions, please leave us a message in the company WeChat group. Every piece of feedback helps us refine it.',
     ],
-    feedbackEmphasis: 'If it did not help you, or even made your work harder, please leave a message in the company WeChat group',
+    feedbackEmphasis: 'If you have any feedback or suggestions, please leave us a message in the company WeChat group',
     continueLabel: 'Continue',
   },
 } as const